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Friday, November 20, 2015
Sunday, November 8, 2015
First Words Of A New Novel
The year is 1917 and the first World War is raging. Meanwhile, our protagonist has seen too much and prefers escaping to Northern Ontario than serving in the military. Here then is the beginning of the sequel to Seven Stones, tentatively titled Shell Shock:
Steam rose from the backs of four horses as they struggled
to pull a heavily loaded sled up a snow-covered hill. On either side of them,
as far as the eye could see, trees too small for harvest were left standing
amid large gaps where giant pines once stood. Behind the horses was a sled
filled with the timber of once mighty trees, piled so high that even sitting at
the lower end of the hill it stood taller than the magnificent draft animals.
One would have thought their task impossible, but the horses
worked in unison with what the loggers standing nearby recognized as pride.
Both man and beast tested their limits in this wilderness, and those that were
not broken by their labor were changed by it nevertheless.
Within the muscles of the straining horses surged the very
essence of life, the urge to test itself against whatever the outside world
demanded of it. They were horses at the nexus of youth and experience at their
work. And they pushed towards the summit without any conception of failure,
nostrils flaring to release steamy breath into the cold morning air. An
occasional whinny came forth like a grunt of affirmation as they pulled.
A man stood atop the pile of logs, holding the reigns. He
shouted encouragement, but the horses needed no external motivator: their task
was clear. And so they lurched, gaining inch by inch, until the first two
horses stood upon the crest, and then the others. A final effort pulled the
sled over the hump.
But there was no rest to be had upon the top, no slow transition
to a gentler labor. No sooner did the sled reach the apex than the very gravity
that had held the sled back now moved it towards them. Slowly at first, so
slowly that it gave the horses an instant of relief, a brief sense of triumph.
But quickly the horses found the situation had changed. Suddenly their burden had
become a pursuer, like some predator out of their primordial past. Now they
needed not to pull but to flee. And because they were harnessed together, they
could not afford to give in to the urge to panic.
Behind them a thick rope was connected to the back of the
sled, attached to a strange device that contained a series of pulleys on the
other side of which was a group of men who sought to slow the sled’s descent.
The driver pulled back on the reigns in order to remind them that he was in
charge. It was his task to keep the horses from giving in to their instinct to
panic, the powerful compulsions that had helped their bloodlines survive for
untold generations. His was the hand that would keep them functioning as a
unit.
Their pride and discipline held, although nervousness could
be seen in their wide-open eyes and the involuntary tics that made their ears
twitch and their tails tuck. Such discipline was more of an effort to them than
the upward pull, more against their nature.
Large hooves found solid footing on the path that had been
well prepared for them by those whose job it was to tend the ice road. Hot sand
had been shoveled upon the freshly fallen snow. Behind them it was the men’s
turn to pull, and they applied themselves with all the pride and animal
intensity the horses had shown, intent on keeping the sled under control.
The horses were perhaps a third of the way down the hill
that was a not so gentle twenty foot decline when the first snap of the rope
was heard. Strong men stared helplessly at the quickly unraveling cords as the
horses seemed to sense the danger. The men released the rope faster, hoping the
horses could make it to the bottom while it still held. But the fiber continued
to uncoil until with a last quick snap it let go.
No time seemed to pass between the snap and the look of
terror that alit in the eyes of the horses. Panic arose in them but it was
checked by their experience and awareness of the situation. Perhaps such
knowledge resided not in thought but merely in muscle memory, still they were
reacting to their predicament in a controlled manner. They needed to run, but
they needed to run as a unit. They would have to keep pace with the load
bearing down on them without straining unduly at their harnesses. They would
have to use all the energy panic provided without surrendering to it.
The driver tried to help them in this, sought to provide
direction and control. But the initial snap of the rope had launched the sled forward,
so that he was facing his own battle to remain his perch atop the logs.
It was a single misplaced hoof that did them in, a slight
break of the rhythm that kept them operating as a single entity. Even then they
might have recovered had it not been for one of the horses in that back that
was a little younger and newer to the job. Panic arose in him with an intensity
that silenced any other concerns. Abandoning the thought of teamwork, he
strained against the harness with all the life that was in him. The other
horses still struggled to work in concert, but it was futile. There was no
unity, no time to react as a team. Panic soon spread among them all.
In the mindless jostle of animals attempting to flee, it was
a short time before one of them went down. It almost managed to regain its
footing but by that time he had brought the horse next to him to the ground as
well. The two front horses continued pulling madly, each in a different
direction. Before the rear horses could get their legs back under them, the
sled was upon them, the thick steel runners slicing effortlessly through
muscles that short moments ago had spent their efforts providing the sled’s
momentum.
The driver had already been thrown, or else had judged the
situation hopeless and jumped from the impending disaster. Nobody would have
blamed him—a jump from such a height would not have been made lightly. The sled
did not get past the fallen horses before the reins tightened, tipping over the
already top-heavy sled. Amid the noise of the crashing sled, of men hurling
curses and logs breaking free from their restraints, the cries of the horses
cut through the chaos. It reigned above the madness as the chief horror. All of
their pride and vitality in the end had brought them nothing but this. Cursing
and shaking his head as he walked down the path towards the horses, the foreman
reached into his Mackinaw jacket and pulled out a pistol.
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