First Sentences of Some of My Favorite Novels.
I recently read an article about the importance of the first
sentence. All right, I didn’t actually read it, I skimmed over it. There was a
picture of some author gazing thoughtfully off into the distance with earth sky
and water in the background, and he threw out some ideas about how the first
sentence of a novel can determine whether the book is worthy of a prize. Oddly
enough, for someone stressing the importance of a first sentence, his initial
thought seemed to me to clock in at somewhere over a thousand words.Perhaps it was just me. I tried
re-reading a few times and then just gave up altogether. You can read it here, although
I don’t recommend it: http://www.theguardian.com/books/booksblog/2014/aug/29/how-pick-man-booker-prizewinner
I really don’t see how you can judge an entire novel by the very first
sentence, any more than you can judge it by the fourth sentence on the 87th
page. Granted, there are some good opening lines, but many great books begin
with a simple statement. In fact, I would much rather judge a book by its cover
than by a single sentence.
But it did have me go back and check the first sentences of
some of my favorite books, just to see if there was anything to it. What
follows is a short list of first sentences from books I regard highly. I’ve
left off the name of the book and the author’s name in order to play a little
game. Can you name any of the books? Just to make it interesting, I’ll offer
the first copy of my newest book, The Association, to whomever can name the
most books based on the sentences provided below. The book will be released
sometime in September. You can e-mail me your answers at jamesrozoff@sbcglobal.net
1)
The one opened the door with a latch-key and
went in, followed by a young fellow who awkwardly removed his cap.
2)
She came out of the store just in time to see
her young son playing on the sidewalk directly in the path of the gray, gaunt
man who strode down the center of the walk like a mechanical derilect.
3)
A squat grey building of only thirty-four
stories.
4)
First of all, it was October, a rare month for
boys.
5)
On an exceptionally hot evening early in July a
young man came out of the garret in which he lodged in S. Place and walked
slowly, as though in hesitation, towards K. Bridge
6)
When Mr. Bilbo Baggins of Bag End announced that
he would shortly be celebrating his eleventy-first birthday with a party of
special magnificence, there was much talk and excitement in Hobbiton.
7)
In 1815, M. Charles Francois-Bienvenu Myriel was
Bishop of D---.
8)
The urge to embark on a work of creation after a
period of sterility is like the desire to make love, very violent, but it can
be appeased by failure.
9)
Just after passing Caraher’s saloon, on the
County Road that ran south from Bonneville, and that divided the Broderson
ranch from that of Los Muertos, Presley was suddenly aware of the faint and
prolonged blowing of a steam whistle that he knew must come from the railroad
shops near the depot at Bonneville.
10)
“I am inclined to think—“ said I.
11)
There lived in Westphalia, in the castle of my
Lord the Baron of Thunder-ten-tronckh, a young man, on whom nature had bestowed
the most agreeable manners.
12)
Around quitting time, Tod Hackett heard a great
din on the road outside his office.
13)
We are at rest five miles behind the front.
14)
The studio was filled with the rich odour of
roses, and when the light summer wind stirred amidst the trees of the garden,
there came through the open door the heavy scent of the lilac, or the more
delicate perfume of the pink-flowering thorn.
15)
On the 6th of January 1482, the
Parisians were awakened by the noise of all the bells within the triple circuit
of the City, the University, and the Town ringing in full peal.
16)
It was a pleasure to burn.
17)
“What’s it going to be then, eh?”
18)
Buck did not read the news, or he would have
known there was trouble brewing, not alone for himself, but for every tide-water
dog, strong of muscle and with warm, long hair, from Puget Sound to San Diego.
It's a rather tough list, so don't feel bad if you didn't get more than a couple. As I said, not even most great novels begin with a memorable first line.
I'm gonna give this a shot.
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